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On the ACT Reading test, Rhetorical word choice and tone questions ask students to judge how an author’s language creates a particular attitude or shapes the reader’s view of an idea. A student must infer tone from a cited phrase and explain what a metaphor does rather than what it merely describes. Items typically point to a short quoted expression or to line numbers, then offer adjective-based tone labels or brief claims about the effect of the image. Common traps include choosing a tone that fits the subject but not the wording, or treating a figurative comparison as a literal description.

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Catching a Street Cry

HUMANITIES: This passage is adapted from the essay “Catching a Street Cry.”
Before portable recording devices, the calls of street vendors survived
mostly in written description. A writer might spell out "fresh
pears" with extra vowels or place the words on a
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musical staff. Such notation seems documentary, but a living cry
contains pitch slides, changes of speed, and responses to a
particular street. Putting it on paper requires choices about which features count.
 
In 1872, music teacher Ada Vale began noting vendors' calls in
the harbor district of Bellweather. Her first notebook renders each
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cry as a short melody with fixed notes and regular bars.
Next to a fish seller's call she wrote, "rises a
third, repeated twice." The neat transcription suggests a stable tune,
as if the seller performed the same musical object at every corner.
 
Vale soon complicated her own method. She followed the fish
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seller on three mornings and recorded five versions. On crowded
streets he shortened the opening; near upper windows he stretched
the final word. Vale crossed out bar lines and added
arrows between notes. The arrows represented glissando: not a jump
from one separate pitch to another, but a continuous slide
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through the pitches between. She also began marking context—weather,
traffic, the height of surrounding buildings—beside the notes.
 
More than two decades later, an archivist found Vale's notebooks
and arranged for several elderly vendors to make wax-cylinder recordings.
The cylinders were produced after Vale's written revisions, not before
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them. None captured the original fish seller, who had died,
but they preserved similar cries from the same market tradition.
When later scholars compared sound and page, they discovered how
politely the notation had domesticated the voices. The cylinders contained
rough breaths, uneven rhythm, and slides too fine for Vale's arrows.
 
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The recording apparatus also rearranged the scene it claimed to
preserve. Because the horn collected sound only at close range,
vendors stood in a quiet back room and aimed their
calls toward a metal cone. One fruit seller began with
the arm gesture he used outdoors, then laughed when the
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archivist reminded him that the cylinder could not see it.
The surviving sound is vivid, but the traffic, distance, movement,
and customer responses of street performance remain outside the groove.
 
It would be easy to conclude that the recordings made
notation obsolete. Yet the cylinders have their own limits. Each
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holds a single performance made when a machine was conspicuously
present. The notebook follows one caller across several streets and
shows variation over time. Its contextual notes reveal adjustments a
studio-like recording cannot. Sound supplies texture; repeated written observation supplies comparison.
 
The contrast changes how Vale's crossed-out bars should be understood.
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They are not merely corrections from error to accuracy. They
record her growing recognition that a street cry is an
interaction rather than a fixed composition. The seller altered duration
and pitch to travel through noise, reach distant listeners, and
preserve breath. His cry had a recognizable contour, but no final version.
 
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For historians, the staff in Vale's notebook is a comb
drawn through water. It catches intervals, repetitions, and broad curves,
while continuous motion slips between its teeth. This metaphor does
not make notation worthless. A comb that fails to hold
the river may still reveal the direction of its current.
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Vale's page lets readers compare mornings that no cylinder recorded,
even as its tidy notes warn us not to mistake
the page for the voice.
 
The episode also explains why scholars now combine forms of
evidence when reconstructing sound. A transcription can identify structure across
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performances; a recording can preserve timbre and microscopic timing; a
diary can describe who listened and why a call changed.
No source is a transparent window. Each is an instrument
that amplifies some features and muffles others.
 
Vale began by treating the street as an outdoor recital
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hall and the vendors as performers of compact tunes. By
the end of her work, she was attending to architecture,
labor, and response. That change is the notebooks' most important
record. They preserve not only traces of vanished calls but
also the process by which one listener learned to hear their variability.

Question 1

The phrase “politely the notation had domesticated the voices” gives the author’s discussion a tone that is:

  1. Agently critical of how neat transcription smooths the calls’ unruly qualities.
  2. Badmiring of how notation civilizes rough market voices into orderly music.
  3. Csympathetic toward vendors whose variable cries resisted neat transcription.
  4. Dneutral and clinical about comparing written notes with recorded sound.
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Answer: A — gently critical of how neat transcription smooths the calls’ unruly qualities.

The verb domesticated suggests that notation made rough, variable calls unnaturally orderly, while politely gives the criticism a restrained, slightly ironic quality. The phrase evaluates notation’s smoothing effect; it does not praise that tidying, express sympathy for the vendors, or adopt a purely technical stance.

Question 2

How does the metaphor of the musical staff as “a comb drawn through water” (lines 49–50) shape the reader’s view of notation?

  1. AIt presents notation as destructive because it permanently separates a performance into fragments.
  2. BIt suggests notation is effortless because water passes freely through every comb.
  3. CIt portrays notation as selectively useful: it catches broad patterns but cannot hold continuous vocal motion.
  4. DIt implies notation changes pitch in the same way a comb changes the direction of a river.
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Answer: C — It portrays notation as selectively useful: it catches broad patterns but cannot hold continuous vocal motion.

The following sentences explain that the staff captures intervals and curves while finer motion slips through, making notation informative but incomplete.

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