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Revising/Editing — Passage-Based

Deleting irrelevant sentences — SHSAT practice questions

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An irrelevant sentence is usually accurate and on the general subject, which is what makes it hard to spot.

In a paragraph about how bees communicate through dances, a sentence about the price of honey at a farmers market mentions bees but does nothing for the paragraph's point. Questions on deleting irrelevant sentences name a paragraph by its sentence numbers and ask which one does not contribute to the central topic or purpose.

Checking each sentence against the paragraph's topic sentence works well, since that opening line sets the job every other sentence must help do. Interesting is not the same as relevant.

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A Second Life for School Furniture

(1) Every summer, Westbridge School once discarded desks and chairs with cracked tops, loose joints, or scratched finishes. (2) Although many pieces were structurally sound, replacing them seemed faster than evaluating individual repairs. (3) A facilities manager proposed a workshop where students could help inspect, repair, and redesign usable furniture.

(4) The program began by sorting furniture into three groups: safe to repair, useful for parts, and unsafe to reuse. (5) Adults checked for hidden damage and removed pieces with bent frames or unstable welds. (6) Students tightened bolts, glued separated wooden joints, and sanded rough edges under supervision. (7) They repaired damaged surfaces. (8) They measured each desktop before cutting thin replacement panels from donated plywood. (9) The main office had recently reupholstered its visitor chairs in the school’s colors. (10) Design students created stencils that turned mismatched tabletops into coordinated patterns without hiding identification numbers.

(11) The workshop paired responsible repair with testing, cost records, and redesigned uses. (12) To test durability, the team placed weights on repaired desks and rocked chairs repeatedly on a flat platform. (13) Any piece that shifted or creaked returned to the workshop for another inspection. (14) Students also calculated the cost of glue, fasteners, paint, and replacement panels for each completed item. (15) Those records showed that repair used fewer funds than replacement for most wooden desks, though not for badly bent metal chairs. (16) The school reduced disposal costs while giving practical design and measurement work a visible place in the building.

(17) The workshop added a parts shelf where usable casters, screws, drawer pulls, and brackets from unsafe furniture were sorted by size. (18) Students cleaned and labeled each part before it could be used in another repair. (19) A teacher requested adjustable tables for a flexible classroom, so students combined compatible legs and tops from several damaged pieces. (20) They tested every height setting and rounded the corners of the replacement tops. (21) The completed tables showed that reuse could involve redesign rather than merely returning an object to its earlier condition.

(22) The group donated extra safe furniture to an after-school center rather than storing pieces the school did not need. (23) Teachers later reported loose parts through a simple form, allowing the workshop to study which repairs lasted. (24) Students wrote repair cards listing materials, dates, test results, and any limits on use. (25) Students also interviewed custodians, whose repair experience helped identify failures that were common, costly, or difficult to notice during a brief classroom inspection. (26) At year’s end, the team presented both successful and rejected projects, emphasizing that responsible reuse sometimes ends with recycling rather than repair.

Question 1Easier

The writer is considering deleting one sentence from the second paragraph (sentences 4–10). Which sentence presents information that does not contribute to the passage’s central topic or purpose and should be deleted?

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Answer: C — sentence 9

Sentence 9 mentions office visitor chairs reupholstered in school colors, a furniture detail that is unrelated to the student workshop’s inspection, repair, testing, and reuse of classroom desks and chairs. Sentence 7 describes the workshop’s surface repairs, sentence 8 explains how replacement panels were measured and cut, and sentence 10 describes the design work that made repaired tabletops usable, so each of those sentences contributes to the passage’s central topic.

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